7 posts, missing the photos of the setting ideas. no group picture.
The initial ideas are good and detailed and clear about what you want to do.
The genre is not very clear, make genre clearer so that the obvious factors are present.
It's not clear what actually happens in the opening sequence and could go into more detail of how it actually started. It's good that they have put the link so that you can actually watch it yourself.
The storyboards are detailed and tell you exactly what is going on.
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